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Columbine
I can't believe this is happening. Eric and Dylan are shooting people outside the library. Oh god I wish hadn't made fun of them. I hope they don't come in here. I hope they don't find me. I don't want to die.
We pushed them to far. If I live through this, I will never ever bully anyone in my life again.
All I can hear is screaming and guns being shot. Every shot I hear, I wonder if they have killed someone. I wonder if my friends are okay. Oh I hope someone has called the police. Please god, don't let them kill me.
But if they find me they are sure to kill me. I tortured them so much. Every day at schoo
Literature
Columbine Kids
Hey there everyone, don't go and run
They're just here to have their fun
You've got no say in what they do
They are the gifed and chosen few
Don't try to stop them, they'll shoot you down
They've already destroyed halk of our town
A gun in their hands, a mission at heart
Ready to die, to blow us apart
They said they'd be good, and yet they lied
All for the sake of genocide
Hey there, teachers, get under your desks
You're about to have some special guests
Come watch the show, don't run away
The Columbine kids are here to stay
Why didn't we help them, thosep oor lost souls?
Their hearts were tainted and filled with holes
Why cou
Literature
Angel of Auschwitz
Dradle, dradle, dradle
They've ripped you from my hands
They've sent me to a world of pain
Where your will is ripped to strands.
Needles are injected
And my skin begins to swell
A small breath of relief before
The Angel sends me back to Hell.
Left thumb, right thumb, left thumb, right
Better hold your britches
'Cause they'll be wet tonight
Left thumb, right thumb, left thumb, right
Better say goodbye because
That smoke will soon be you.
More needles, more blood
More cries of pain
But the Angel does not stop
He is sadistic and insane.
A smirk of thought
And a needle that gleams
You'll be alright
Or so it seems.
Pus, bloo
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Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold, also known as the Columbine shooters.
Any comments telling me I'm going to Hell will be very kindly ignored. Take it for what it is, which is a work of fiction and artistic expression.
I don't condone the Columbine shootings.
Edit, as of 01/01/2009:
Okay, people, seriously. Time for a talk.
I am not making any claims about anyone's sexuality. I am not stating that this is what actually happened. I am not saying that I am any sort of authority on anything regarding this.
Before anyone complains about what I'm going to say, several of the inaccuracies are there due to the piece needing to fit a prompt - this was written for a competition almost three years ago. This is an old piece. I am not planning on reworking it. I am not going to rewrite it. I am not going to do anything with this in any way, shape or form. This is still here so I have an easy way to remember that I wrote it, honestly, and so I can have a way to judge any improvement I may have made in my writing since this was posted.
I have stated that this is a work of fiction - take it as a reimagining, if it makes you feel better to word it that way. I'm honestly tired of people lecturing me about the inaccuracies - I already know that it's inaccurate, and I would really appreciate people not jumping down my throat because "that's not how it happened at all!" So please, please, just untwist your knickers and stop trying to "correct" me - complaining to me about facts that I "got wrong" will do absolutely nothing but waste both your time and mine.
While I really do appreciate your attempts to educate me on what happened at Columbine, I have already done a fair amount of research on the topic. I am perfectly aware that this is not an accurate representation, nor was it intended to be in the first place. Furthermore, as this is not a recent piece, I have no interest in reworking it. All of the lecturing about inaccuracies in a supremely old piece that wasn't supposed to be an accurate retelling in the first place (and one that I have no interest in updating) really isn't helping anyone. If you consider it to be immature of me to refuse to update or edit this even though I know there are things wrong with it, so be it. I'm sorry if I've lost any of your respect due to such matters, but honestly, enough is enough.
If you have something to say to me about the mechanics of the piece itself - issues with my writing, etc - feel free to comment, but please knock it off when it comes to the complaints of inaccuracy. Believe it or not, I already know.
Any comments telling me I'm going to Hell will be very kindly ignored. Take it for what it is, which is a work of fiction and artistic expression.
I don't condone the Columbine shootings.
Edit, as of 01/01/2009:
Okay, people, seriously. Time for a talk.
I am not making any claims about anyone's sexuality. I am not stating that this is what actually happened. I am not saying that I am any sort of authority on anything regarding this.
Before anyone complains about what I'm going to say, several of the inaccuracies are there due to the piece needing to fit a prompt - this was written for a competition almost three years ago. This is an old piece. I am not planning on reworking it. I am not going to rewrite it. I am not going to do anything with this in any way, shape or form. This is still here so I have an easy way to remember that I wrote it, honestly, and so I can have a way to judge any improvement I may have made in my writing since this was posted.
I have stated that this is a work of fiction - take it as a reimagining, if it makes you feel better to word it that way. I'm honestly tired of people lecturing me about the inaccuracies - I already know that it's inaccurate, and I would really appreciate people not jumping down my throat because "that's not how it happened at all!" So please, please, just untwist your knickers and stop trying to "correct" me - complaining to me about facts that I "got wrong" will do absolutely nothing but waste both your time and mine.
While I really do appreciate your attempts to educate me on what happened at Columbine, I have already done a fair amount of research on the topic. I am perfectly aware that this is not an accurate representation, nor was it intended to be in the first place. Furthermore, as this is not a recent piece, I have no interest in reworking it. All of the lecturing about inaccuracies in a supremely old piece that wasn't supposed to be an accurate retelling in the first place (and one that I have no interest in updating) really isn't helping anyone. If you consider it to be immature of me to refuse to update or edit this even though I know there are things wrong with it, so be it. I'm sorry if I've lost any of your respect due to such matters, but honestly, enough is enough.
If you have something to say to me about the mechanics of the piece itself - issues with my writing, etc - feel free to comment, but please knock it off when it comes to the complaints of inaccuracy. Believe it or not, I already know.
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This was beautiful. I don't even mind the homosexual undertones between these two in this because it was done so well. The only thing I wish is that it had been longer.